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(4) When I go shopping for food I usually make a shopping list (4.1) because it saves time and you will buy everything you have planned (4.1.1). Besides, you won’t be tempted to spend too much buying what you actually don’t need (4.1.2). However, when I shop for clothes, it’s normally just one or two things I need to buy (4.2) and I try my best to go for them and not to pay attention to all the other very beautiful stylish things telling myself that I will buy them next time (4.2.1). Образец ответа на дополнительный вопрос: Do you decide on buying things because they have been very widely advertised or for some other reasons? (5) Well, I sometimes buy a thing, even if I don’t actually need it (5.1). You know, advertising is so powerful. It makes you remember and look at the thing that has been advertised more carefully (5.1.1). This is the way advertising works. However, more often I decide to buy something if I like it a lot (5.2), if I see that it is good quality (5.2.1). • Все пункты предложенного плана рассмотрены: (1) if it is fun for you to go shopping, why/why not (2) if you prefer shopping on your own or with someone else, why (3) if you prefer shopping in small shops or big supermarkets and department stores, why (4) if you plan what things to buy before going shopping or just buy the things you see and like while shopping, why • Каждый пункт полностью раскрыт, так как содержит не простое перечисление фактов или идей (1.1; 1.2; 1.3; 2.1; 3.1; 3.2; 3.3; 3.4; 4.1; 4.2), а развитие мысли в виде приводимых доводов и пояснений (1.1.1; 1.1.2; 1.1.3; 1.2.1; 1.2.2; 1.3.1; 2.1.1; 2.1.2; 2.2.1; 3.1.1; 3.1.2; 3.2.1; 3.3.1; 4.1.1; 4.1.2; 4.2.1) . • В целом высказывание связное и логичное, состоящее из целых предложений, а не из обрывочных фраз. Аргументы логически связаны с развиваемой мыслью. 78
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