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9. Jordan did not believe that Serena had embarrassed him unintentionally. Jordan believed that Serena had embarrassed him intentionally. 10. It is a shame that there are so many holidays that go uncelebrated. It is a shame that so many holidays go uncelebrated. OR I wish we celebrated more holidays. 11. While singing in the shower, the bar of soap slipped from her hands. The bar of soap slipped from her hands while she sang in the shower. 12. Looking back, the dog was following us. When we looked back, we saw the dog following us. 13. Lying on a stretcher, they carried him out. He was carried out on a stretcher. 14. Flying out the window, he grabbed the papers. He grabbed the papers as they were flying out the window. 15. Stepping off the bus, the shopping center was just ahead. As I stepped off the bus, I saw the shopping center just ahead. Effective Writing Quiz 2 Answers 1. It is necessary that you not be uninformed about this case. You must be informed about this case. 2. There is ample evidence which indicates that the attorneys for the defense did not provide inadequate counseling to their client. Ample evidence shows that the defense attorneys provided adequate counseling to their client. 3. Speaking and to listen well are important elements of communication. Speaking and listening well are important elements of communication. OR To speak and to listen well are important communication elements. 4. To win is the obvious goal, but playing fair is important too. Winning is the obvious goal, but playing fair is important too. OR To win is the obvious goal, but to play fair is important too. 175
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