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13. Lying on a stretcher, they carried him out. 14. Flying out the window, he grabbed the papers. 15. Stepping off the bus, the shopping center was just ahead. Effective Writing Quiz 2 Change the following sentences to make them more effective. Answers are on page 135. 1. It is necessary that you not be uninformed about this case. 2. There is ample evidence which indicates that the attorneys for the defense did not provide inadequate counseling to their client. 3. Speaking and to listen well are important elements of communication. 4. To win is the obvious goal, but playing fair is important too. 5. They were charged with assault, robbery, and forging checks. 6. I remember his generosity and that he was considerate. 7. She worked quickly and in an efficient manner. 8. When working with power tools, eyes should be protected. 9. When changing a diaper, a baby should be on his or her back. 10. I have some letters the mail carrier delivered in my purse. 11. We have tuna casserole I made in the refrigerator. 12. Mollie came over while I was playing the piano with a piece of pound cake. 13. While asleep, the flea bit the dog. 14. I tried calling to tell you about that TV show five times. 15. Although very spicy, Dana managed to finish the enchilada. Grammar Mastery Test Correct the following sentences. Answers are on page 136. 1. Some of the desserts was left by the end of the birthday party. 2. The papa bear thought that some of his porridge were missing. 3. Your brilliant excuses almost makes up for your tardiness. 134
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